SummersRipplingBreath

Meggy!!!!! Hi! Thi poem is just amazing. Why can't I write like this. (don't worry I'm not goig to launch into my drama magigy!) i really like this poem it ...

ahhhhh this makes me sad! it has a wired arau of saddnes lingering about it. it flows really well. i can picture the images so well in my head. it ...

hey! your right it is cheesy but everybody loves a bit of cheese right? you could have made it a tad longer or added a bit in where he got ...