Sujana

And you've come again! Not that I dislike your presence, you bring things to a very different light and leave me with something to do after your reviews. Am I ...

Hm. Now I'm a bit torn. I will edit/rewrite/bleh it as I do have the skeleton in the works, but I'll consider your review as well.

Ah wait, never mind the Medea comparison. My mistake. Just take it for what it is.

Okay, but I warn you that most of this is going through a major edit after this. You can read it soon, reviews are always welcome, but after that I'll ...

Yes, it doesn't make sense for Ahmad to react that way, does it? I'll have to fix that, maybe edit it a bit, lengthen it to see if the message ...

Thank you for the review!

Thanks!

Haha. In all actuality there isn't meant to be another chapter--this is sort of my little monument to a poet from my homeland, and is meant to feel a little ...

Yeah, who knows? Haha.

Thank you!

Yeah. You sort of made me want to stop writing my own mystery anthology thing, because I'm afraid it won't live up to yours.

Hi! Not coming in for a review, just to say I'm expecting another chapter soon. I like this. Really light-hearted, really cute. You say it might get darker, but I ...

Thank you for the kind words. In all honesty, publishing's a monster of its own--I'm not sure what I'm supposed to do, where I'm supposed to go! So sadly, I'll ...

Thank you for the advice--I always did feel the first part was a little choppy, though I didn't know how to fix it. I'll be sure to soon!

Honestly, I did like the idea of calling out people on their bullshit when it comes to sex workers and the sort. The abecedarian format weirded me out a little ...