Sujana

So, this was alright. Just alright. It did bring a little insight into bipolar disorder for me, but I think it needs a little more organization. For one, consider whether ...

Not a review, just wanted to say I think this is really cool. There are lots of spaces for improvement, but I like the circular feel of the narrative and ...

I finally figured out what you could say thats different from most coming out stories @Kyllorac sent me some insight on the Queer Inklings club and they said at one ...

I finally figured out what you could say thats different from most coming out stories @Kyllorac sent me some insight on the Queer Inklings club and they said at one ...

I finally figured out what you could say thats different from most coming out stories @Kyllorac sent me some insight on the Queer Inklings club and they said at one ...

I finally figured out what you could say thats different from most coming out stories @Kyllorac sent me some insight on the Queer Inklings club and they said at one ...

lol its okay. i don't want to change your vision, but i do like the ship (its a good ship marms), just don't feel pressured into doing anything with it ...

im very sad but i will accept this revelation. thank you for the information

okay marms youre cheating you cant just hook me on belligerent lesbian tension like this >>:( very unfair

Can do, friend. Hope you have a good time writing your next adventure.

I'll be happy to read through the second one if you do plan a second one. Though, fair warning, I'm not easily impressed, but progress is always a nice thing ...

I forgot to address the 'Best Friend' bit on the other chapter, but basically yeah, it's okay if you want to say "BEST FWIENDS" because it's really minor in the ...

Sorry if I sounded too harsh. I'm glad that you're planning on addressing the age gap thing, and also it's pretty interesting that you're going the subtle route when addressing ...

lol, yeah, it was a suggestion. I sort of read it as more a relaxing exercise for you than anything you were seriously working on, but like use the advice ...

Oh boy! I'm sorry, I thought the difference between UK and US was limited to the placement of Us. Let me edit that out.