SuicideKing

King, here. SuicideKing, rather teenage angst as it sounds, is actually a reference to the King of Hearts, a playing card that looks to be committing suicide by driving a ...

First picture: The edit is well done, but I feel that you could make the effect more prominent by making the color more bold, and less gray. Second and Third ...

Very tranquil--it has an almost spiritual feel to it, what with the sun shining through the clouds and all. In my opinion, the only thing that would make the picture ...

Agreed that the text in your signatures is hard to read. However, your grasp of manga is quite good in reference to your sketches. They merely need a few touch ...

The mere fact that we have "taboo" phrases and words in writing defeats the purpose of writing. I disagree with all of the above. As long as any of these ...

A word of advice, should you wish to get reviews... If the "About the Author" segment is true, I would remove the last name and the city of the author, ...

Pretty good plot, but the characters are a bit cliche. I agree with the former, but not with the latter. You've presented us with a bare-bones plot. No characters. The ...

Swearing has its place, as most things often do. Everything in moderation, as they say. A piece with intense situations with no swearing may come across as weak, while a ...

Church. My comments from part 1 stands. I also think you should combine the two parts; prologues are rarely a two-part affair, and they are short enough that combining them ...

Church. My first reaction to this was the organization. It is rather rough for the eyes to look on, because it's not properly separated into paragraphs. Since the PHP forums ...

Tag! My first advice is to give this piece a quick run through for grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Small things like: ...skillfully crafted for optimum efficiancy. With a misspelled "efficiency," ...