SuicideCrusader

I like this piece. You do well with description that kinda leaves me envious. You kept my interest the entire time. And let me wanting to read the next chapter. ...

Well its short but you have a great beginning. You caught me with the first sentence. I would like to see more. Please tell me their will be more. I'm ...

Disclaimer: I do not own Marvel or any of their characters. 5 Mephisto scowled as he watched his minions run from MJ in fear. At the beginning she was barely ...

Well I would like to say I enjoyed however it was too short to enjoy. I want more. I want to enjoy and put in my memory as one of ...

Disclaimer: I do not own the rights to Marvel or any of their characters. Mary Jane entered a room where Peter was wearing a blue suit black vest and a ...

Interesting begining. It does catch your interest immediaely. I do feel that the explanation of who is who in the second chapter feels outta place or lacking Concern for Fang. ...

Still quite interesting. Timberwolf seems to have taken a liking to Brigid. So I wonder what will happen now. Update soon.

Very interesting. I wonder if she has some kinda latent ability or will she be like Karate Kid. Only time will tell.

Nice I love the way you described the Dinosaur. You gave it a great image. I love the name of the jungle also. Many really don't expect a dinosaur to ...

Disclaimer: I do not own the rights to Marvel or their characters. 3 The two walked through a cave for a mile encountering nothing eventful which made Morlun nervous. He ...

Disclaimer: I do not own Marvel nor any of their characters. 2 The next morning Morlun and MJ arrived in Dresden, Germany. The legend of Mephisto started here, thus here ...

Hey Hey hey You cannot leave us hanging like this! I wanna read more. I was caught by how you state that a beauty had a beast in her. Later ...

Much too fast need details lota details. Thoughts what is going on in his head? He just woke up from a couple millienium sleep I don't think he is going ...

Quite an interesting concept I think you rushed it a bit when the towers were hit. That was a tramatic experiance and you seemed to lack that part. I do ...

Interesting concept. I would like to see how ths story would continue. In away I would like to see how she grows on the trip and on the planet. Her ...