Sugarbowl

I just thought I should reply to that critique, because those two spllings you pointed out are in fact the correct British spellings :) So, since I'm in Britain, they'll ...

((Thanks again for the reviews. I've tried your ideas out and editted chapter 2 accordingly. Edits are in bold to stop you having to search the whole chapter for the ...

((Thanks for the reviews :D I'll take your advice and post the next part, which might make the first a little clearer. I'm going to post it in here with ...