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Re: a visit to the past
Great! i like it but you need to make it look more like the past ;P
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Re: the fall
Hmm its got lots of meaning n hard tones, but overall its nice.
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Re: Rainbow
Nice, hey this is red, right? which means are ya going to do other colours too? because your story or whatever is it is called rainbow which conclude lots of ...
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Re: The Last Hour
Nice :) I like it! Only when your writing bout the last hour, you tell what last vision it was of the thing your talking about, overall its good, keep ...
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Re: Waiting for Love
Beautiful poem! I like it :) its true on how you feel when you fall in love and then don't tell it to the dude you like Keep up! xD
Dec 10, 2011