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Thanks for the review. When I wrote this, I felt that all of this information was necessary. Your review wasn't clear on what is unnecessary, so if you could just ...

Thanks for the review! Sassy reviews are honestly some of the most helpful. I actually did know where I was going when I wrote this chapter. I'm basically just showing ...

I thought I noticed some when I read it earlier, but I can't find them now. Sorry.

Thanks for the review. It was kind of just a random story that popped into my head. It came to me just as I wrote it. It gave me a ...

That's fine with me. :)

Thanks again! I do think the chapter would make a lot more sense in the context of the first two chapters. Part of my thought process with Charles and Veronica ...

Thanks. I will definitely take your suggestions to revision. I really appreciate the review.

I gotta tell you. I published chapters three and four several weeks ago. I'm not sure if you've seen them or even been on lately, but I would really like ...

Thanks a lot for the review. I don't know if you read the first two chapters, but they clarify things a lot more. Chapter two mostly followed Charles to make ...

chapters 3 and 4 are out now if you're interested

Niki is actually just Charles's nickname for Veronica. I guess I kinda did throw it in there. Sorry for the confusion.

I just published chapter two.

Thanks! Just to let you know, I just published chapter two.

I'm sorry, but it will actually take a long time for you to find out what the Peters discover. It sounds kind of wierd, and just let me know when ...

You are relatively accurate in your description of this chapter as a Harry Potter imitation. I actually kind of use that to bring out later elements that will be unexpected ...