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Thanks. :) I did write this for an English creative writing test so that's mainly why it's all squished in and stuff. And the ending's a bit of a cliff ...

2 Elgrada sat in her tent watching the festivities in the distance below her. The village centre was full of people, their bonfire burning high above the small rooftops and ...

Thaks for your post Embee! I have noticed that section of dialogue is pretttty long but this is the only time I'm actually going to be focusing on the King ...

I really enjoyed this. It seems kinda sad at the end :( although I did like the last few lines. I do agree that the idea is a bit of ...

Oh wow! That's an awsome story! I couldn't stop reading to turn on the light so now my eyes kinda hurt. But it was totally worth it. I loved your ...

I love your imagery and writing in general. The structure's different from any poetry I've read before which is probably why I enjoyed as much as I did. Also, the ...

I love this story, it's official. I can't wait to read more and find out what happens next.

I still love Kenji. He's amazing. You know about his hands and stuff already... but his hair is awsome!

The black storm clouds circled high above Castle Rock as the King sat back on his throne in the dimly lit room. Galvon looked absently through the windows as he ...

It was a calm, clear night in Braidswood. A warm breeze blew through the trees as Luna and Ava left Manor House. The taxi had arrived right on time and ...