StreetRat

Alright, I agree with everyone else...I NEVER would have guessed that this was your first poem ever. So don't hide your face, you did a really good job, I'm not ...

Man, I love everything that you write. I especially love the beginning. It makes the most sense in the world, and I'm sure a lot of people could relate to ...

I understand where you're coming from. My mom had some type of rare cancer, and I wrote her something too, although she never got to read it. I hope everything ...

Alright, Mandorelute, she's a young woman, and you're REALLY going to give her that huge of a critique? Seriously? Calm down. Not everybody can be writing geniuses like you. I ...

This is beautiful, with a lot of truth to it. I'm glad the world isn't perfect. People are always trying to perfect it. And although the intentions of perfection may ...