Storygirl95

Hey, everyone. I have a question. In my story, I have a scene where my two main characters have their car break down. It starts to rain, so they rush ...

Cain and Abel. Romulus and Remus. Rudolf Dassler and, Adolf "Adi" Dassler. (Real life people) Unmmm if I'm getting into fictional shows, not to sound like a stereotypical girl, but ...

Hi, everyone. I'm struggling with something and wonder if you have any advice. I have two main characters, a guy and a girl. In the beginning, the guy is very ...

He came over and she tried to say that but he knew her a little too well at that point so he knew she was lying. It led to a ...

My biggest problems for this one were balancing out the characters so nobody was too sassy or soft, and then connecting everything. There's a line where the guy comes to ...

Yeah, I feel you. It's a struggle sometimes haha. But the novel(that's right, it's a novel now :D) is almost done! I'm so excited. :) Thank you for your wishes. ...

@Lightsong thanks for the suggestions! I appreciate them. They're very helpful. :D @Carlito thank you as well for your ideas! All of the things you listed give me guidance on ...

It's okay. Such is the life of authors, right? Hehehe, write? :P Don't worry. You did actually help me. I've been feeling hung up on those parts so I've been ...

Thank you for your reminder to breathe haha. I needed that. :D The place I'm most comfortable with actually happens to be where the story is planned to go. I ...

Okay, guys. I never thought a day would come when I'd ask for something like this. Please don't judge me haha. I need some help with incorporating a story element. ...

Haha, I feel you. It makes it even worse because this is the first novel/novella/whatever it is that's not a short story in the romance genre. I'm even relatively new ...

Haha. I'm about to go to sleep, but I'll think up some words in my brain. I have a lot of words I've never even used in my life in ...

Thanks, @Dreamy! They were very close together, so he really is like an inch away. However, I can see what you're saying. I'll change it. The other sentence really plagued ...

Hi, guys! I wrote a scene where the two main characters finally kiss, and I would like some feedback on it. I've never done romance before, so I don't know ...

@Prokaryote You have no idea. Actually, now I'm leaning more towards sacrificing it again. Hahaha, I'm just kidding. I'm pretty frustrated, but I'm in too deep to stop now. With ...