StoryWeaver13

Yeah, like callmeLily73 said, very unique. Good writing, something...honest?...about it. I don't know. Either way, it was well-written. :)

Great poem, good use of words and really original. :)

Oh no, not another story I've got to keep reading!!! Haha, not that that's so much a bad thing. It was a good beginning, and the ending of it made ...

***An improv., like most of my poems, so not very good. Either way, please comment, and I'll return the favor. :) *** I remember A willow tree Too tall for ...

I love this, the symbolism is perfect and a little sad, because it reminds me of all the times when I was little and how I've gotten further from my ...

***Started daydreaming, and kind of just wrote it. Sorry, not very good... :? *** My feathered friends Soaring, Swooping Without end. Wings spread wide Like a kite Dashing, Diving Through ...

Great poem, really creative and I loved the symbolism. WAY less typical than the average poems that are posted pretty often (no offense intended to anyone...) Unique and beyond average. ...

This was good, just not...I don't know...anything unusual? I think finding some more elaborate words to help it stand out a little bit would help, but that's just my opinion. ...

This is a really sad little story...what makes it worse is knowing at there are a lot of true stories along these lines. :( I liked the ending a lot ...

I liked it, it makes me wish it was summmer even more than I did before. *Sighhh* Oh well, you're poem was really good, I would just get rid of ...

I really like your first chapter, but I think this prologue needs some work (or just totally elliminate it from your story...you don't need it. :wink: ) Either way, just ...

I really like your story, the ending was INSANELY unpredicted by me (I live in Idaho, but nothing this excited ever seems to happen, darn it...haha). I only have a ...

Haha, sounds like my sort of train of thought! At least you seemed to kinda end each thing on a moderately positive note though. :D Yep; wet converse, freezing snow, ...

What I think a lot of stories lack nowadays is a good moral...luckily, this one carried its moral through-and-through, and I thought it was great. ;) Sad...the little boy almost ...

Wow, I really like this! It has something really, what's the word...? Well something really flowing and natural about it. Simple but elegent. I've only got one correction. "She stood ...