StoryWeaver13

Thanks, this really helps, I'll probably be looking back on this a dozen times while I try to write a historic fiction. So again, thank you thank you, thank you.

Haha, nice. *sigghhhh* I got caught up in the Twilight series for like...three days. My parents bought the books and I had to read them (they're books, I'm an obsessive ...

Grr, romance crud is so difficult!!! It's become so overworked that love itself is practically a cliche! Thanks for these tips, really helpful.

I've never really been interested in romantic fiction, chick/flick stuff, but decided to give this romantic fiction section a shot. Most of the things I've seen here have been the ...

I'm not so much a fan of religious stuff in stories (not trying to be offensive...I'm a Christian too, it's just more of a preference; either way though, stick to ...

A few friendly critiques. ;) Though encased by ice. Her icy stare is always there. You'll notice you use 'ice' and 'icy', and it just doesn't make it seem so ...

Like I said about the first chapter, you've sparked my curiosity. Keep writing. ;)

Personally, I have no critiques on this poem--amazing. ;) Your wording is great and left a dramatic image in my mind. Like I said, I have no complaints--keep writing. ;)

Really good, it flows well and is fun to read; good rhythm too. Like was already pointed out, the line "is all I have to show for my persistence" is ...

a dark and morbid sort of way...either way, I love this! It's really good, almost makes me think of Edgar Allen Poe (which is a good thing--after all, he's like, ...

I thought this poem was great actually. I loved how you explained the confusion and chaos that's sort of involved in love, and how it sort of loses meaning. Another ...

I really like this poem. It has a lot of thought put into it, and I can totally relate. The rhyme scheme was a little off in parts, but other ...

You make a lot of good points that I TOTALLY agree with. Over the years, well...what's love anymore? Some people say it's the strongest emotion it really the weakest? Sorry, ...

In a way, shorter poems can be more difficult because you have to get right to making your point. This was really good though! I totally got the imagery and ...

Good beginning, I'd keep it up and build from it. You've already grabbed my attention. :)