StoryWeaver13

My complaints are mostly along the lines of spacing. You space it so much that it just gives it the appearance of being overwhelming and way more difficult to read. ...

Interesting poem and really dramatic, but I think it should be cut a little shorter. To me, it started out a bold poem, but the further it went on the ...

Haha...Jenny...*ahem* anywayy...awesome drawings! The buildings are sweet and the paintbrush is especially well-done. I'm no artist but I wish I could draw like this! You've got talent, man. Keep it ...

I like and understand that interpretation to a point...but I guess that's how it is - art speaks to some and not to others. Getting your viewpoint on it a ...

***Edited but still looking to improve. Thanks for the tips!!! :wink: There was a letter. The apartment was (as always) in complete disarray - paint was splattered wildly along miscellaneous ...

Nice poem, I think the rhyme scheme was just a little off though...also just a little grammar correction that I have to bug you about :wink: Teachers have a go ...

I'm going to have to agree with the person who posted above me, it's just too simple. What I really like about photographs is that they tend to capture not ...

Lil’ Fish Island was a strange lil’ place, With skies of sapphire blue And water so clear that it seemed a reflection Of the heavens above reigning true. Here the ...

The battle was over. Rifles lowered, survivors fleeted…then silence. In a strange way, this quiet was far more eerie and frightening than the fight itself, as the emptiness revealed the ...

Haha, this was awesome, thanks for the laugh! :lol:

I keep finding myself reading your stuff, ofir; keep it up, your writing's great. :wink: This was a really cool poem, the way you talk about Alice's denying reality is ...

The only thing I have to say is watch your spelling, it can be kinda distracting if there are a lot of typos and mispelled words. Either way, though, cool ...

Oops, thanks on that Attolia, I didn't catch that! Haha, you might have noticed my Spanish isn't exactly brilliant...I meant to mess up on Jamie's but I didn't catch the ...

They've already picked at the grammar and stuff (which is good, 'cause I hate doing that anyway) so no need to reiterate. Cool story, normally not my style AT ALL ...

***I'm determined to write a quick short story every day until I find a plot that I can keep up with. Soo...here goes nothing. Anyway, a little bit about this: ...