StoryWeaver13

Pic 1: I like the sky but it's all just a little plain. Pic 2: Again, a bit dull. Pic 3: This one I like a little more than the ...

This is MY idea of maturity! Soon as I heard this, I thought "Oh, THIS is probably gonna be interesting... :lol: " First, the "fun" stuff. "roll play" should be ...

Aww, darn, when it comes to picking on you these guys beat me to it...just kidding. :P Since they've already given you a ton of critiques, I won't do any ...

This is so cute, I feel like I'm looking back at a chlidhood memory reading this! :lol: Now, a little critiques... With a hat and carrot nose, that suit him ...

Yay I love reviewing, so here goes... Just like every night, something would disturb the silence. I'd known my house was haunted since I was three. Scary, the exact same ...

I liked it, especially this line-- The solitude makes you feel complete. I don't know why, I just love the line. It was really relateable for me, I guess. *sighh* ...

Wow, nevermind, it's working now...sort just won't let me access it through the "submit your work" now.

***I didn't really know what to call this...some suggestions would be great. Accusing eyes pass an uncaring glance Upon their victim, her eyes alight With tears that creep across their ...

Sorry if this doesn't belong here, but this was the only place (for whatever odd reason) that it would let me access. Every time I try to post something it's ...

Please, please don't take this personally...but this is kinda cliche. You had a couple of little mistakes and things that you could probably fix a little bit more, but nothing ...

Last three pictures? Amazing. The color, style...everything about them is just really spot-on and unique. Your wolf sketches leave a little less to be desired, if I'm going to be ...

***A little improv. poem for a school assignment. Tear it apart, I just kind of decided to have some fun with this one. Bare feet upon sun-scorched seas of grass ...

This is so cool and unique. I have no critiques, no critisism...nothing to really pick on you about! Overall, just plain cool!!!

Two hard things to draw--roses and hands!!! But you did a good job, so nice. The rose is a little sloppy, but it's definately a nice pic overall. I actually ...

Short, but interesting. There was something about your wording that seemed very meticulous to me, and I liked your comparisons and such. Although the "two worlds" thing is quite a ...