StoryWeaver13

Wow, nice. I think you captured this really well and done something that a lot of people seem to lack - bringing it to life and capturing deeper meaning. I ...

Whoa, I think the idea of this is really cool! BUT I think you didn't do enough to capture it. Try finding ways to really bring this to life, to ...

Your key has locked My heart; Padlocked Now yours to tear apart. Unreachable by me For I am yours Unwillingly. And your cruel hands Force me to smile My mindlessness ...

Oh my gosh this is the biggest problem I have! I constantly get these ideas running through my head that I really want to use, but I have no clue ...

That's the worst, right? But then I discovered this beautiful, magical thing called a thesaurus. Using an online one really helps me a lot too.

I agree that the first verse is kinda confusing, I just don't get it. The rest is good though, and I got the message really clearly. Remember that you don't ...

Wow, this is really great, one of the best I've seen on the site. I'm soo jealous. Your detail is great and the style is awesome (I love Monet). Everything ...

These were good; my only suggestion is that for the first one, work on the shading. A little tip for getting the shading right is choosing a place for the ...

Because I'm too shy to speak.

Haha, this is hilarious. :lol: *liked

The shading's really nice and I can tell you can draw. There are just a few things that bug me. First off, the shape of the dragon in general just ...

To answer the question above, yes, I beli e ve they do have way too much power. The first sentence (or at the least the first paragraph) of whatever you're ...

When you have a poem (especially one so short) you really have to make each line count. I think you could've found a way to make this bolder, more emotional ...

Hey, and welcome to the site. First off, I love your character's voice. It feels real to me, like someone sitting there talking. I like that you point out your ...

This is good, I'd just find a way to break the first lines up some more so it looks more like a poem than a paragraph. Oh, and "granite" should ...