StoryWeaver13

Monty Python!!! :lol: I agree with the other person who posted, you should write a short story about this. *sighh* Poor plot bunnies that feed on well-written plots, I think ...

This is a nice poem, it has a certain simplicity to it. I think you should use some punctuation, though, and "then" should be "than" in the last stanza. Other ...

Wow, it's soo beautiful! I love her style and the way she painted this, it looks so warm and gentle. The colors are really nice too, and you can see ...

Tears only fall in private This was the only line I didn't like. Other than that, I thought it was a really emotional (and kind of morbidly chilling) piece. Your ...

Hey. First off, sorry to hear what happened to your horse. I have a horse of my own, but it's so difficult because I can rarely see her. *Sighhh* The ...

I actually really liked it. It was so cool, especially because that's kind of how my own train of thought typically works...but I think it was really fun and I ...

***I'm not a fan of rhyming couplets, but it was a school assignment so... My hands reach out to grip the air, As if the wind is it's soft blue ...

There are parts I like and parts I don't. Sometimes I thought, "Oh, great, another teenage angst poem about some morbidly depressed emo person." But at the same time, I ...

What was your message in the poem. What were you trying to say? Freedom is only for the Fighting? That it's not? That the people who fight aren't the ones ...

Hey there. You did a pretty good job from the guy's perspective I think, me being the tomboyish type who is constantly around guys and all. So, yeah, no real ...

This is really good! I don't know why, but I love that you did it in purple. :) I think this was mentioned already, but work on your proportions. That's ...

Being from Idaho also, I can totally relate and these are definately things I love so much, especially the star garnets because I've always thought that was so cool. But ...

I used to know -- no, think -- I was a normal girl. I would wouldn't have the "know" there...but you know, I think you could come up with a ...

Hey there. She taped her pencil on the desk Did you mean tapped? waiting for the day to end . The rules on grammar aren't so strict with poetry, but ...

I thought this was cool and it felt free; it didn't feel like you were determinedly bound to a certain rhyme scheme, like many try to do. Like Suzanne, I ...