StoryWeaver13

Oh my gosh I love this and I can totally relate! I miss my best friend so much; this makes me a little heart-sick. :( But it was a great ...

I like these for the most part, and I've always been a fan of black and white photographs so I really liked those, they seemed quite dramatic to me. The ...

***Please don't make fun of me. I've had enough of that from when I was a kid. Please read, and thanks to all who review.*** I sat on the steps ...

I think the plot sounds really interesting, but this was more of a dull information dump above all else, and really didn't capture my attention. First, think about how you ...

I like this, it's a good poem and the ending really gave me that moment of "ohhhh, NOW the puzzle-pieces fit together! NOW it's interesting!" Very cool. I didn't like ...

Wow, man, these are so cool. I can't believe you did these! First: Great, I like the style a lot. It's very abstract yet realistic somehow, like you drew a ...

I closed my eyes. This was it. I reached my goal. I made it to the track finals and I was going to win. It took a lot of work ...

***If you haven't already, check out the prologue. Really don't like this right now...help please!*** I was surprised to wake up the next morning. Surprised, because I hadn’t realized I’d ...

Aww, sad. :( Still, I have to review honestly. Negatives: I think the repetition of some of the lines took something away. I was also confused by the last part, ...

I like this and the basic idea, there are just a couple of things. First off, it felt like the poem was divided about half-way...I'm not completely sure why, but ...

Hey there! I like the idea behind this poem, and the story's well-developed, I just think it needs a little work. Just think about tweaking it here and there to ...

Hahaha that was pretty funny and the cartoons are really cute!!! I love cartoony comic sort of stuff, and these were really good! Love the space bunny, and whatever that ...

Wow, I really like this, you use great imagery and imagination. I felt like there was no real structure, but it was still a really great poem. My only suggestion ...

Hey, here to read this next chapter. When you ' r e skydiving and your sure you’re going to die, you don’t exactly think Hmm… where’s my coin? I want ...

I like it!!! *clicks like button* This is really creative, and the whole dream thing used to actually happen to me when I was little (and a even now I ...