StoryWeaver13

[quote]It is night time, almost three in the morning. The streets of Birchwick are peaceful. Some houses are dark where people slumber inside. Others have lights peeping out the windows. ...

***Sorry if it kinda sucks, I wrote it up real quick. A man went to the house last night To fix the broken pipe, Along with all the other things ...

Aww, cute! Really realistic, too. Did you use charcoal or what? The fur's got a lot of nice texture to it. Anyway, do you have a scanner? This is still ...

To be honest, this seemed sort of more of a teenage-angst poem than anything else. I think Jagged did a good job of really touching down on the points that ...

Hey there. I looked up out of the small slit in the cabin as the dawn drifted in through . It might just be me, but I found that a ...

Thanks to both, and yeah, luckily I did end up overcoming this as I got older, so the story itself doesn't have a happy ending but I like to think ...

Haha, that is so cool!!! How did you get it to do that? Whenever I put spacing and such it takes it away...oh well, in any case this was awesome. ...

Hey Cherry, and welcome to the site! You have constant dreams like that? So do I. A useful (but sometimes emotionally-challenging) source of inspiration, huh? Glad you're putting them to ...

I agree with Elinor Brynn. How can you take pride in anything that you post but didn't create yourself? Seriously, use your own skill and originality, that's what the site ...

Wow, I've been seeing a lot of flower pics lately...must be spring! :D These are all pretty nice, I didn't find much interest in the first but I did really ...

Hey there. First off, watch your capitalization. There were LOTS of sentences that started with a lowercase letter. OK, so for the rest of it... Story about two brother and ...

My problem with this is that there are a lot of lines in here that I've heard a thousand times before. It just makes the whole thing sound kind of ...

I love the wording and whole idea of this, it's very clever. Reading the title I thought it would be horribly cliche (most things about love are, aren't they?) but ...

A perfect statement of how I've been feeling lately. Emotions personified. You had an elogant use of words, yet at the same time it felt really relatable. I loved the ...

In the rain washed streets of LA, Kammal Bradie leant leaned against a street lamp in a pool of light, puffing on a cigarette. Good wording, it paints a strong ...