StoryWeaver13

I'm not familiar with the style, so sorry for that, but it is a good poem. I really like the whole theme in general, and I think it was a ...

***Um, I feel pretty iffy about this poem, and I'd really like some outside opinions. Thanks! Full moon’s light Like silver On my tongue, Quiet like a voice Without a ...

Hey, I really liked the last poem you wrote, so I thought I might check out another! This is cool, it feels really loose and free and unpolished, but in ...

The good: It was a cool poem, really free-flowing and creative, and I thought the way it portrayed everything was very open-minded and cool. Unlike a lot of other poems ...

Hey, and welcome to the site! I think this was a good poem, but isn't a GREAT poem. It's just (and I've been saying this a lot lately) nothing unusual. ...

This was (to be honest...) nothing special. I got the message but didn't feel the emotion. It seemed like it was lacking something, like something should've been there that wasn't. ...

Good poem, and like the previous reviewer said, provoking. I'm not really sure as to why some things were italicized, though. Not really a distraction or issue or anything, but ...

*Likes* WOW!!! I don't have much to really say, but...wow!!! These are amazing, really. The angles, focal point, colors, contrast and overall interest of the photos are just spot-on. Gotta ...

I thought overall this was really good. I like how it begins kind of a more gentle feel, but then grows in power as it gets to its middle, fading ...

I thought this was really good; you did a nice job portaying emotion and overall the rhythm and flow worked very well. I think this could almost be classified as ...

The afternoon sun was gleaming through the vertical blinds on my window, and I could smell the fresh sea air as it circled my bedroom. It was as if the ...

Hey there, I'm (finally) back for the next chapter! Gotta say, I love it. There's still a lot we don't know about the character though: age, appearance, etc. I also ...

Typically I'm not a fan of religious pieces, but this was very well-written I'll admit. Each stanza was better than the one before, but there was no real weak point ...

Yikes, you can't see it. Or, I can't anyway. Canislupis said she couldn't either so...might wanna try uploading it again; I'm far from a computer wiz, but you probably put ...

Is this going to be longer? Because I feel like the story really just began. If it's not going to be expanded, I suggest coming up with some surprising twist ...