StoryWeaver13

The biggest advice: get rid of that white!!! The rest takes time and patience, and learning different techniques and finding your own style. Your lines are pretty sloppy, and I ...

Wow, this is really something. The more I read, the more and more I was sucked in to all of it, wondering what twists and turns were coming up next. ...

I like it. It's nothing too insanely exciting (at least, not for someone like me who's usually suffering through six months of snow) but it's a really pretty picture nad ...

Well there's really not much to review here, but it's really cool. Did you take this picture yourself? If you got it off the internet it's plagarism, but if not ...

Wow. Not only is the actual subject a wildly creative idea and insanely impressive, but the obvious work and detailing is just...well, wow. No doubt you're one of the best ...

Hey there. Well, this was good. We got a nice glimpse of who the characters are for the most part, although I feel like we still don't know all that ...

Well I like it. I think it might benefit from a little more punctuation but that's just me. The imagery and such are a little overworked, but are also well-done ...

Haha, the replies to your stuff's always insanely entertaining. Anyway, not much to say. Another spot-on couple of comics from Jenthura. Do you ever try getting your comics into newspapers? ...

Picture 1: I like the basic lighting of it, and it plays really well on the black and white, but it's lacking a real focal point, something that really catches ...

Hey there. OK, so this was a decent poem, but there were a couple of things that just bugged me a little. You're pretty consistent with your rhyme scheme until ...

Cool, I like the whole un-poetry idea and how you kind of choose to toss the rules out the window. It feels really fun and free. Because of the style ...

***Um...not quite sure what to think of this one...O.o Alone in a house With no rooms and no doors No walls and no windows No roof and no floors There's ...

Not too fond of #2 and 3 (2 was kind of strange and uninteresting and I didn't really know what it was, while the angle on #3 was just kind ...

Hmm...I can tell you're really starting to master the basics (ie. shading, proportions) but they still need work. Her lips are kind of unnatural-looking and could also be a little ...

I thought this was really honest and well-written, and while there was little action it managed to keep my interest. Your grammar's fine, your spelling, etc., and overall I just ...