StoryWeaver13

I do not understand what my angel means to me, A flawless being from Heaven, one favored by He. Her face marks no heartbreak or suffering - And therefore no ...

Like people already pointed out, life's squished in there. Other than that, I think it just needs a little more work, because it seems like some parts of the picture ...

Well I kind of wish this ended a little more positively, or at least reflected a glimmer of positivity, but maybe that's just the blindly-optimistic side of me speaking. It ...

My main complaint is the lack of real emotion involved. It felt as though you were just bluntly stating things, rather than really putting that essential feeling into it. There ...

Well I like a lot of the wording that was used, it's really pretty and flowing and soft (like a lullaby). I don't have much in the way of improving ...

Well you said you wrote this in seventh grade, so it's an older poem, and I can sort of tell because I can see that some of the imagery and ...

Well I don't usually look at lyrics just because you can't hear them being played out, and melody and style can really impact the impression that your song has. I ...

Well it's an interesting piece I just have a couple nitpicks. My first thing is the repeating of the first line. On rare occasions this has a positive impact, but ...

Ugh, working with charcoal is TORTURE. It's messy and difficult, not to mention it really can't be erased or overlooked because it's so bold. But actually you did a pretty ...

Thanks for reviewing a piece of mine, time to return the favor! Anyway, this is a really great piece in my opinion. There was a lot of depth, and sometimes ...

Well, thanks for reviewing a piece of mine, so now it's time to return the favor! Anyway, I didn't expect to like this poem at all. Maybe it was my ...

Well, usually I don't like poems with this rhyme scheme just because it's so overdone, but it really was a pretty poem. At first I hadn't read that it was ...

@ultraviolet and theBlackSheep Thanks, glad you liked it. @Thrillhouse Well, not much of a comment, but an opinion's an opinion I guess. Thanks for sharing yours. @Navita Thanks for the ...

Well, at first it was a little confusing, just because it was a lot of dialogue and you didn't really have time to get a hold of who these people ...

I think this is cool; it's really clever and well-written, and contains a lot of dramatic imagery that makes it stand out. The way you present it makes it really ...