StoryWeaver13

Why howdy, I do believe I just reviewed another poem of yours! Well I definitely noticed some similarities between the two syntax-wise, but I like this one much, much better. ...

Okay, so I kinda like the concept here. My one problem was that you really didn't find a way to tie this all together. And I think that once it ...

Right before writing my review I looked at the one creativityrules gave, and she is so right. YWS is amazing for turning yourself from "just another writer" to gaining your ...

I know how this feels, and I think this captured the kind of sad and heart-sore emotion that goes along with missing someone you can't see. I wasn't crazy about ...

This is a really nice picture. I believe there's a forum to tell you how to directly post this picture on the site, though, just a side-note. ;) But anyway, ...

Hello there. :D Well, I have some issues with the prologue. It's just too....blunt, in my opinion. Opening up fictional creatures to a novel can be difficult, especially in first ...

This really struck a chord with me, since I had a childhood stroke and basically had to go through a series of "recovery" sessions and, similar to you, the whole ...

This is really good. I love the figure in the center of it especially, there's something kinda spooky about it when added with the title.

They spilled the stars of the milky way, Staining night's black cloth; Who would've thought that such a substance Was such a brilliant broth? So suns were sliced to nebulae, ...

Sometimes, you need comfort. Sometimes you need to be alone. When someone special dies, you don't know what you need. Sometimes, you feel like you need both at once. Now, ...

I peer down at the girl in the green coat and openly criticize her in my mind. How are you openly criticizing if it's in your mind? She's taken several ...

This is pretty good, but it's a bit of a run-on. Try breaking these sentences down a bit with commas or by switching them up and you'll have a better ...

Wow, I think this says a lot, because I know a lot of girls who have been in this situation with older guys, and it's a scary thought. I liked ...

Freaking brilliant. That is all.

We’ve been around for seven years, Growing larger every day. We’ve been around for seven years, And forever more we’ll stay. There’s no limit on learning, For that’s why we’re ...