StoryWeaver13

Well I like it, I've always had a thing for black and white pictures. I think I like the first more than the second, because something about the second just ...

Since when was fake the new trend, A clone of a clone considered cool? Individuality wasn’t once a handicap; Different wasn’t a disease. Am I supposed to look like all ...

There's something really pure and honest about this poem that I like, and I think it shows a lot of innocence (like a lot of religious poems do...which is a ...

Honestly, I can't hardly read this because of the way it's formatted and stuff. I dunno if you have some reason for making it like that, but it's really hard ...

I think simplycomplex got it right with saying that it sounded kind of ranting...you got your emotions across but didn't give us a taste of what you were feeling or ...

Wow, this is really a dramatic and powerful piece, I like it. This is a call to the outcasts, that the world looks down upon. We’re all the soldiers, and ...

OK, so I accidently found this photo-editing thing on my computer when I was trying to open up my pictures (I'm hopeless when it comes to computers haha) and started ...

Oohhh, I really like these! Okay, so getting out of the way the ones I don't like as much... The cat and pine tree pics. Not as good. It's just ...

Wow, I like it! There's something about it that gives it a simple, natural flow while also allowing for enough depth to give us imagery and emotion. I also like ...

Wow, wow, wow! I really don't have much to say, this is seriously good. If there was one area I'd say needed any fixing, it'd be the forehead where the ...

I just didn't think this captured the emotion enough for me. I think you told without portraying, and that was what made this not work out. It needed more depth, ...

Wow, I'm impressed, my first poem sounded like...well, I'm not even gonna go there, but this is a really great start and shows a whole lot of potential. The poem ...

There were parts of it that just felt kinda off, but all the same I thought this was a really fun and creative poem! The only problems came from the ...

Well first off I don't think this belongs under historical fiction, because even if it's taking place in the past we really aren't getting much of a sense of that, ...

Yeah, the writers before me really hit the nail on the head with their corrections. Your writing in general shows need for improvement but also reveals a lot of promise, ...