StoryWeaver13

Oh my gosh, this is the second time on this site I've been compared to Shel Silverstein!!! Not a bad thing, though, I read his work constantly when I was ...

LOVE IT!!! I only had a few things that kinda bugged me... The first was the clothing description of the first whatever-it-is. The way you called a t-shirt "short" just ...

Not sure how I feel about this, it's pretty, um...weird? ) O.o Haha, well anyway I kind of just wrote this on the spot 'cause I was bored, just thought ...

This didn't have a whole lot of impact on me personally, but to each his own, right? Anyway, since I'm still reviewing, my basic thought was that you never really ...

Yeah there's not a lot to review because it's so short, but there is something really refreshing about it...quirky, somebody already said, and I think that sums it up perfectly. ...

Well I'm the oldest kid in my family, but I still know how this sort of thing feels - it's weird when someone suddenly transforms to become someone else, and ...

I like it. I wish there was some way to know how you hear it, you know what I mean? Because the sound is *obviously* an important element of a ...

I think this did too much direct telling, like there wasn't really any depth to it, and because of that it felt lacking, and too typical of a piece. I ...

*applause* I follow you because of your artwork, but I think I'll have to keep a sharper eye out for your writing too now, because I'm really hooked. If I'm ...

I don't like the way things keep repeating through the poem, it makes it lose its momentum and it never really struck a chord with me. I think you need ...

First off, welcome to YWS! And what a great first piece to start with. ;) Anyway, I really like this, the imagery is beautiful and the whole concept is just ...

Ahhh!!! My two number-one pet peeves with drawing! It's on lined paper and the hair is drawn with the common mistake that people make, and that's the belief that they ...

Picture 1: I think somebody pointed out looking at human anatomy? Good idea, because your shading isn't bad but you have to work on the basic form of the face. ...

Not bad, but you could do so much to expand on it. You really kind of ran through a brainstorm of "is it this?" but never really gave us time ...

Huh, I really like this. You pretty much defeated all the things I hate about stupid romances - it wasn't sappy, cliche, and awkward to read. Also, the relationship felt ...