StoryWeaver13

LOVE it!!! Really, it's awesome. I like the whole style, it's really interesting and out there. What did you draw it on? It almost looks like it's on a chalkboard ...

I hate being mean, but sometimes I feel like I have to. Remember, this is only because I see room for improvement, and of course, it's only an opinion... First ...

Pretty cool! The idea in general is really interesting and intricate, and I have no clue how you can have such patience to draw a single letter this way. BUT ...

Ugghhh I hate anything that involves us girls being disrespected or degraded, and I honestly hate anything in this area!!! BUT I have to say that this somehow managed to ...

OK so our challenge was to write about an inanimate object, and the one I was given was a soda can. I'm not sure how I feel about it yet, ...

This is okay, but I feel like it has the potential to be amazing. And I think all you have to do is stay away from that rhyme scheme. Rhyme ...

I think seeing this in person it would look better, but it still looks good. I agree with ElinorBrynn that the girl and lion are too small or the pegasus ...

Well I found this by accident but I gotta say, wow. :LOL: Anyway, there isn't really a way to review this stuff seriously, is there? But as far as being ...

I felt like the lines were too short and, because of that, and because it was so small, it didn't have a lot of force. I'm not saying that a ...

It isn't very good. I don't usually write poetry. That's okay, why not start learning? And I think that's really what's going to help you - practice. Poetry is hard ...

I get what ya mean, I was thinking about "sheeple" lately too (haha, my new favorite word...) This is my first year of public school and I was shocked when ...

I agree with the last reviewer who said it kinda just needed some more emotion. I think the reason it wasn't emotional is because you told us what was going ...

I liked this; the fact that it was short and simple didn't effect the subtle impact it had, I actually didn't mind the fact that the last line was a ...

OK, I feel like being picky, so bear with me...:D Droplets of sun fell between softly rustling leaves, dancing over a young woman’s upturned face. She breathed heavily, pulling the ...

A poem I did for class. The idea was to prove in the poem that the narrator of the poem was clearly wrong, so I chose to do somebody who ...