StoryWeaver13

Oh wow I love these! These are awesome pics, I love 'em all. Darn, now I only have on critiques!

Wazzup? OK, so here's my take on this... I actually really like this. The first stanza was my favorite; it was really powerful and had a good rhythm to it. ...

Please don't take this too offensively, but I've seen this all before. I know this kind of thing is popular and I also know why. People (especially young adults/teens) can ...

I like the whole idea, but I actually think I would've liked it more if it was even just a little less straightforward. I would've liked to just get a ...

I'm not a huge fan of the third, but I like the first two, and they'd all work well as desktop backgrounds. I think the first is the best just ...

I like how warm and autumny these pics are (and yeah, I know autumny's probably not a word, but it is now...) The colors are really warm and I love ...

I agree with the first reviewer, there were times when you couldn't define the "partner," "Blue Jay," yadda yadda yadda. I think I followed your story pretty easy but there ...

Well, this is a bitter little piece...*Sigh* Tomorrow's Monday, isn't it? But anyway, I agree with the reviewers before me; you just need to expand on it and let it ...

Not sure what I think of it so far because I wrote it up so fast, looking for a couple outside opinions. Feel free to tear it apart. :D Theorem ...

I'm not really sure what you're getting at...maybe this just isn't my thing but I thought it was a little weird...umm, what else is there to say? I'm not a ...

Everyone in the world can claim to be a part of a dysfunctional family. Not me, though. No, my family has proven far too many times to count that they ...

My problem with this is that it's too simple. I get what you're saying because I know how all of this feels being a writer and all, but I felt ...

For the most part I like this, I love the depth and imagery it has, but at the same time it also has a directness about it. But actually, I ...

I think your problem is you stay too focused on the story; you tell us what happens but you don't open us up to how you feel so that we ...

Okay, my first complaint is how you shift tenses. Sometimes you make it sounds like you're in that time and place, while others it sounds like the past. It just ...