StoryWeaver13

This was a nice poem; unlike a lot of religious pieces on the site it isn't preachy or offensive to other religions - like I believe Christianity itself should be, ...

The idea behind this is really good, and it can be really hard to write about stuff that's going on in our modern world because 1. most people don't want ...

Okay, to be honest I'm not a fan of this and I'll tell you why. The first (and biggest) issue is the format - you have a huge block of ...

My first impression was that this would be really shaky and have a feeble rhyme scheme, but actually it was really nice. You got deeper and deeper into this, and ...

Really pretty, I like all of the warm colors mingled with the sunlight. They could all use a little more interest and I'm not sure I like the focus of ...

My heartbeat quickened as my Mom and I kneeled the small garden behind our stone house. Her long, flaming red hair fell over her soft shoulders. Her striking green eyes, ...

This is on my to-read list; I've heard so much about it and now (like I did with Twilight, though I hated it) I want to see what all the ...

First off, welcome to YWS!!! i have this weird habit of narrating my life while it is happening. like all of a sudden, out of completely no where i will ...

This sounds cool! I've never done a storybook before, so I wanna give this one a try if that's OK. Name: Evangeline Lanoa (called Lina) Age: 21 Gender: Female Occupation: ...

This is sweet, I've never been a huge fan of religious poems and stuff because they tend to verge on being preachy, but this was nice and simple and pure ...

OK, I'm no good at computer-type stuff so I have no idea how to set a link, but do you think you could take a look at the first chapter ...

Okay, so I read the first chapter and have to say that this one is much better. On the other hand, it could still use some improvement. The first thing ...

I watched Mortimer as he sat outside. He looked across the road, at the open gate that led to the graveyard. Now obviously this is not normal behaviour, for a ...

My styurps clicked against the hard wood floor of the bar. The slated doors swung aimlessly in their frame. The piano was playing lightly in the backround. The smell of ...

***Very very very very rough draft, so please, pick it apart.*** A Tomboy’s Life A piracy of plundering bugs, Of mud-sodden bodies and rough one-armed hugs. We wander barefoot on ...