StoryWeaver13

Awwww.... Okay, that is the cutest little octopus I've ever seen. I love the color and overall style, the thing just looks so soft and squishy ! It looks like ...

My bag slung over my shoulder ; I slowed my pace down to a walk. Cars whizzed by me, and I felt like they were all watching me. Walking up ...

Very, very cool. What's the symbol in the center though? Maybe it's just been too long since I've read the series...but I can't remember anything about it...well either way, this ...

Well I started off the same way you did, and I'll be totally honest with myself...I sucked at first. But the good thing about this site is that everybody's here ...

Nitpicks - a little too fast-paced (I know, you don't want insanely long chapters that nobody bothers reading - but if you have to, break them up into sections) and ...

Really good, really dramatic and I want to read more. I only have one *tiny* word of advice - When I entered my house, it was completely dark. Maybe he ...

Hey Angel, welcome to the site! The whole place is pretty straightforward, but if you ever need help with anything you can always message me. :D So, post some reviews, ...

People write about this topic a lot, and honestly it can get overly-emotional and sappy. Yours didn't, and instead it was honest and pure. Personally, I also liked to hear ...

Wow. I really love this. Will you message me when you finish the next chapter? Anyway, you so far seem to have a good plot and a wicked use of ...

Very rough, so please feel free to tear it apart. I don’t think she’d cleaned her house for a century or two. “And here’s the spare room,” Mrs. Valasquez said, ...

Awww such sad poetry from everyone today. :'( But this told a really meaningful story, and I can't say anything more than that really. I think you could've done a ...

I have no name I am but a ghost For no one see's me No apostrophe needed in sees. Even as I lie here Among the crowds . I see ...

Is this based off of that news piece about the girl who committed suicide after being bullied? Because I heard that this morning and it was one of the saddest ...

He trudged through the snow, slowed by the heaviness of the falling ice. The cold fallen snow was speckled with brown from dirt of the passing public. As he walk ...

I was gonna get what I wanted I had an impeccable plan Everything was going so perfectly Then along came this man Already not a fan of the rhyme scheme... ...