StoryWeaver13

This was good, it definitely made me smile and nod. *sigh* So true, and I'm guilty of many of these things myself. My one issue is that you changed rhyme ...

For him. I'm sorry, and goodbye.

This is pretty cool, but I felt like it was really just the beginning backbone of something. Like I felt like you could've expanded this further, and really brought us ...

Okay, so my problem with this is that it's just kind of typical for a love poem. Romance poems (or romance in general) is a hard category because it's so ...

I actually like this quite a lot, and I'm not a romance-type person typically (at least, not unless it's half-heartedly squeezed between a bunch of action scenes, ha ha. XD ...

This was pretty different from what we usually see on the site, but that's what I liked about it. You have a really mature outlook too. But what I really ...

Feel free to tear apart. An experiment with style a bit, but mostly just a dumping ground for over-angsty emotions. *walks to corner and cries like some sappy teen movie*...*ahem* ...

I should really collect these poems I write and label them as a collective something, the majority of them including this one are written in under five minutes and in ...

This surprised me. I hadn't expected the direction this took at all! Ha ha, I do this in math class too, I swear it's an STD (story-transmitted-disease). But, naturally, your ...

Well as far as first poems go this isn't bad at all. And you tackled a difficult subject matter - yes, everyone can write about love, but that's exactly the ...

I definitely thought that this was interesting, and truly I have no criticisms. You manage to make this flow pretty well for such a loosely-formatted poem, and I like that ...

Not sure how many parts I'll make to this, possibly only two, though maybe three. Grateful for all comments, critiques, and ramblings. The train was still rumbling underneath me like ...

‘My name is Antonio Khan. I live in London. I have a hot girlfriend and a cool best friend. That’s all that you really need to know about me.’ Ha ...

Aww, this is sweet. I'm really close with my dad, so this related to me in a strange sort of backwards way, and I'm sure a lot of other people ...

This was nice, but I felt like it could've had more imagery so we could really delve in on what you were feeling. I suppose it felt a little too ...