StoryWeaver13

Ayra gaped at her. Because cats like that don’t exist, or shouldn’t. Because you threw it off of me as if it weighed nothing. Because I saw my homeroom teacher ...

First one: I love horses, and this is a classic pic. Second: Definately my favorite. In fact, I love this picture. It has those rich, warm autumn colors and a ...

Okay, first off, I want this boat. It will be MINE. *Ahem* Okay, now looking at the actual picture. I'm not a big fan of the angle. I can also ...

After following 3 chapters of my story, I feel like the least I can do is review something of yours. :) It was a sunny day in St. Petersburg, Florida, ...

Would you review the first chapter of my novel 13 ? I'm all for a harsh review if you so desire. :D

I agree with Zig. It was crammed and just didn't feel connected to us. Along with that, it just didn't feel complete. I think putting more into this and giving ...

The link didn't get me anywhere, but there's actually a couple of ways to get the photos straight onto the site. There's a forum with the information you'd need to ...

To me, this doesn't work as well as a poem as it would as lyrics. I think that the words just work better that way, and would sound better if ...

Well, I think the reviewer had most of my questions/things I didn't understand; really, I just want to know why he's got all this anger kind of bottled up in ...

Another chapter I'm not very confident in...may end up taking this in a completely different direction, so input is totally appreciated! Recreation hour Sometimes I’d play pretend. It wasn’t so ...

To answer your questions, I have no clue where this is going but I'm excited to find out. And yes, the description's great - 30 degrees and snowing here and ...

Aww these are really adorable. Yeah, I don't really know how to critique origami...but I like the way you set the backgrounds up with them, that really helped add something ...

Thanks for reviewing the 2nd chapter of my novel. Now to return the favor. :) Okay, so the biggest point in improving this is description. Everyone's voice is different, but ...

Haha, I really like this. It's simple but at the same time it holds a clever wit, which is what makes it work so well. There were some really smart ...

First pic: Unedited? Wow, pretty place! Don't really have any complaints, overall nice effect. Second: Oooh, this one looks spooky, and I love that tree (whatever kind of tree it ...