StoryWeaver13

Okay, first I'll get to the points you mention beforehand. 1) The only error is when you typed this actual "what I need help with" part and write know instead ...

First off, after reading this chapter I'm all for joining the group. Second, I love the cover for it; I'm jealous, because I've never been good at making covers for ...

60-second writing challenge...probably my first-ever love poem... I would tell you if I could - But now a rose just ain’t so sweet. I would tell you this is love, ...

Well, this wasn't too bad at first, but then you bordered overly-angsty with the last line, and it takes away from your poem's credibility. I just think you could've avoided ...

I liked this. Of course, I'm a little biased because of how much I love all things nature-oriented. Still, I understood the imagery and you did a good job with ...

I like you're character, her narration is relateable but more mature than most teens, which I personally respect. But even in this short piece, you're able to make her 3-dimensional ...

Cool, pyramid! Anyways, your actual poem. It's simple and blunt, but not necessarily bad. Saying that, though, I kind of wish you'd put more depth into it. It was just ...

Here, as promised. ;) I was young. I was sick. Did I know you? Did I comprehend? I think the other reviewer asked this too, but...comprehend what? Overall, this was ...

This was amazing! Of course, I was born mastering this art (not to brag or anything...) but to those who aren't socially-impaired I'm sure this will be a lot of ...

The bell above the door had jingled as it would have for any other customer waltzing in for a burger or a cup of coffee before a late shift, but ...

Yay! Someone else on a mission to brighten up the depressing poetry section on this site. :D This was quirky and fun, simple but sweet, and I really like it. ...

These are all the reasons I love this site! I can be on here for a straight hour and never feel like I'm wasting my time, like I do just ...

Hey, thanks for reviewing the first chapter of my novel, thought maybe I'd return the favor! First going out and touching on a couple of things that people already pointed ...

The first is beautiful, but the second's definately my favorite. You capture so much emotions in your lines, it's amazing. I love the eyes and expression - perfectly natural, completely ...

I don't even know how you got this picture, but it's stellar. I love the bluejay's coloring and feathers. I swear, he's posing for you. There really isn't anything wrong ...