StoryWeaver13

This was pretty good, the only thing is that I really didn't get much of a message so much as an observation. It isn't needed to have some kind of ...

Insanely bored, so the idea was to come up with a random title and then create a poem where each line started with the corresponding word, like the first line ...

I think what really makes this poem work is how well it reads aloud, and it just rolls perfectly off of your tongue. You use really good alliteration and rhythm, ...

1st: I like this one, really cool and definitely one of my favorites. 2nd: This one's nice too, but not my favorite. 3rd: I like the black-and-white, but still not ...

Haha, this is awesome on such a nerdy level. Anyway, I was reading it trying to figure out what was talking, hadn't figured out it was a protractor until the ...

Well, a little out of season but who doesn't like a Christmas in February? But I really can relate; ever since my family moved, I just haven't felt that "magic." ...

They tell me to calm down. “It’s okay, just stay right here.” Am I fifteen or five? “Come this way, sweetie.” She grabs my arm and leads me; I want ...

This needs to be added to! Even though this is pretty powerful for only three lines, it's just not enough to stand on its own. It leaves too many ifs ...

This was a cool idea, even though I honestly don't know who you're talking about (I'm a bad guesser, I guess, haha). Anyway, I like your descriptions of imperfection, and ...

The first thing I thought was, "Well, this is a little pessimistic," (even though it's really pretty and things I've thought about on a daily basis), but then the last ...

There was the box - Mahogany, old polished wood Inscribed with golden design. I saw it when I was little, Knew it’s contents by heart. Grandma’s bracelets, Clip-on earrings and ...

This was so cool! *liked Anyway, your style really is detached and queer, which is so cool. Only a few people can really pull this off without making it dry, ...

I thought this was good, just a few little things. & Unforgettable times. First, I'd write "and" instead of "&" in all of the places where you do that. I'd ...

So far, this is really cool. I'm usually not into fantasy just because stories of vampires and elves (ESPECIALLY vampires, ugh, thank you Stephanie Meyer) but this has something unique ...

He sits on the street, owns none but a guitar, And a knapsack, the clothes on his back, And a few dimes here and there. He won’t take handouts, won’t ...