StoryWeaver13

I'm such a tomboy, I don't even know why I try writing this romance stuff. But it was the middle of the night and this just kind of spilled out. ...

This is a cool pic! I like the colors, they're all really rich and deep. The necklace itself is really cool too. There was an interesting look in the gold ...

It was sort of systematic how she climbed over the railings. She had done it so many times before that she no longer even considered the drop down if she ...

I see the man, or perhaps sense him, as he enters my home, shovel straddled upon his wide shoulders, torch brandished before him. One cannot see the stars from my ...

***NOTE: to anybody following the story, the aunt's name was changed from Lina to Emily. Yeah, too many "L" names with the unexpected character addition. Chapter Nine Jordan This whole ...

This is good! It could be done with a darker pencil, but part of that is probably just because it's photographed, I know that lightens it a lot sometimes. Other ...

Wow, this was classic. *applause* I can't take this seriously enough for a real, honest review...but classic. My favorite lines - Now this poem is a work of art because ...

As a starting poem, this really isn't horrible. But it could still use a lot of work. ;) My conscience is a swirl, I get kind of a mental image ...

You have a really good way of making the images vivid, and the overall tone really brings this together well. Plot-wise this was interesting too, but I felt like I ...

This was really cool, I'll definitely be looking out for your next chapters. I think plot-wise this is really good, but why do you use apostrophes instead of quotation marks? ...

We are complete hypocrites if, to punish a killer, we kill him. C'mon. Really. Besides this, people can be innocent. Circumstancial evidence, no matter how fool-proof, can sometimes be proven ...

CHAPTER EIGHT Lane “What…the…?” Everybody stood stone-still; Mrs. Sinclair had a knife clasped tightly in her hands and stared across at her husband with a look way creepier than I ...

Yeah, I agree about the 'creepy' aspect, but this is still a really good poem. The prompt's actually part of what makes it so interesting; it's not something that people ...

*Liked Wow, this was soo good! I haven't seen such a good piece on YWS for a while. Unfortunately, this means that I have no nitpicks. Darn.

Yes, a little disturbed. Haha, no, this is actual pretty entertaining to read in its own morbid little way. It has a lot of dialogue and lack of detail, which ...