StoryWeaver13

This was an interesting idea, and this was written pretty well, but like the first reviewer pointed out it lacked rhythm or structure. Even though it's free-verse, there needs to ...

I ndividuality has always been L acking in love, or lust at least, O r maybe I’ve defied all belief, V anity too common for E ven the truest truth ...

“Cut!” yelled the director. My heart dropped and I screamed inside. What was I doing wrong this time? “Chelsea, you need to act surprised when they all come to you. ...

This isn't really my style, but it was pretty well-written. I think it could be "tweaked" a little bit here and there, just cleaned up overall and given some commas ...

This was okay, but really I think that it needed more. It was just kind of typical. Your main problem is cliche words (yep, believe it or not, even certain ...

Another...quirky...?...poem. Fine steely-gray interior, Painted blue above but Peeling away to show The craftsmanship, the Truemanship, The Man-Has-Made- With-Love-manship. They call you junk, Tease t

First: Ooh, sheep! I like it. Second: Like you said already, kind of dull. It's just done a lot. Third: My favorite! Fourth: This one's kind of cool too, I ...

Another quick-write, very weird, feel free to boo and hiss. He is complacent. Suppose he’s just The man on the road, Tells himself he’s got nobody To help him, and ...

First: Really cool! I like this one, and I don't really have any complaints. Second: Awesome picture, but I have to say, I see it a lot. It's a little ...

I thought this was really good, and I can definitely relate. I'm a gymnast, a sport infamous for its annorexics, but I love your view on it being "selfish" to ...

Well this isn't really my style, I'm not that into Manga (I know, a whole Manga-mob is going to hate me for this), but these look pretty good. On the ...

An ancient piano rests silently in its forgotten memory. The way this is worded is a little weird... The room deserted for decades. I think this could be put a ...

Bug's right, there are a TON of things that need to get cleaned up in this (and you'll get a lot more reviews on context of your story if it's ...

I kind of felt like it was a little rushed, and it would've been nice to have a little more of their background and relationship and things along that line, ...

This was good, but the one thing was (like they already said before) short poems can work if everything gets wrapped up the right way, but this just felt like ...