StoryWeaver13

Ohhh, cool pic! I know, that was helpful. It's simple, but I like the color-quality to it and the way the fan wings are kind of blurred. There's not a ...

Okay, so just finished the review of your prologue and now I'm here, and I've got to say this is pretty good. The only problem is that you're lacking the ...

You know, while there are books out there about 14-year-olds, I do agree that after the coming-of-age years they just don't have a lot of that same sort of trend, ...

Okay, so this was good. It felt a little rushed, but it was still a solid start. I'm pretty sure another reviewer already pointed out the fact that the information ...

This was actually pretty good. There was a really natural feel that can be hard to capture in poetry sometimes, and I liked the simple concept. Well, I can't think ...

Actually, I thought this was really cool! I read an article by someone (can't remember who), and it was an old piece. The guy had originally just written these sort ...

My life itself has become a chore, In which I'm forced to abandon hope And hang my soul up at the door. Honestly, the first impression I get is a ...

This was cute, if nothing else. It just felt...happy? It was just sort of confused but curious, and that was interesting to me. The only thing's that I think it ...

Okay, so I'm going to agree with Elinor Brynn a lot here. This poem was definitely not bad, but that doesn't mean that it can't be improved. The problem was ...

I know the length will terrify plenty of reviewers from this piece, but it's so well-written. And you know what? Don't shorten it. If we all wrote for the sake ...

I definitely think this needs to be expanded on. Really we just don't even get a complete sense of what you're trying to say, but your lines and use of ...

Unfortunately I can't seem to get all of my chapters to go together for one novel on this site (no clue why, all of my others ones have worked), but ...

Got in a huge fight with my mother, kind of just venting my anger out in a less-destructive way than tearing up the pillows in my room and punching a ...

Heroes in Embers Chapter One I don’t know why I always walked past the school. I should’ve never wanted to see Ferris Elementary again. I also don’t know why I ...

Abigail narrowed her sapphire eyes, trying to see if the room ever ended. Shadows danced in the corners of the chamber, rearing and rising to the high ceiling, twirling and ...