StoryWeaver13

I like it. My one problem is that it sounds a little like "saunter" though.

I don't find this childish. I love it. : ) Really, there's a childlike aspect to it, but that's what makes it mesmerizingly beautiful. Your characters are interesting and have ...

I like this a lot, the imagery is beautiful and the words are just articulated really well. I see a lot of works on the site that are intentionally short ...

Adara Vigil I started running. To be honest, I've had plenty experience running before, considering my history has an escaped foster kid. Heh, who was I kidding? They'd stopped looking ...

Usually I get a little tired of the cocky-characters-trying-to-change, but you know sometimes they really are funny. I think a lot of it has to do with your approach. Find ...

I think my problem with this is that, when you have such a short piece, you need to make it clever. This is fine as it is, but it lacked ...

I agree with this sooo much. : ) I hate how seriously everyone is taking life (and how everyone is almost FORCED to take life seriously....whether it be good grades ...

I don't know, this poem is nice but it is lacking a certain uniqueness that I'm usually picky about finding in poetry. My problem is (and I've said this in ...

I really like this. It's kinda got that off-beat personality, and I think that's really cool. A couple people might/probably will complain about the inconsistent rhyming, but personally I've never ...

Name: Adara Vigil Age: [13-19] 17 Gender: Girl Power: Controls fire Curse:Using her abilities too aggressively can seriously hurt her. She's been taken to the ER twice on the account ...

Save a spot for girl, specials?

Not that I had a license either, but I failed my Drivers' Ed tests 2 times. *gasp* He should've worn his lucky pants! Okay, irrelevant.... This story is cute, but ...

Typically poems that are short-lined and quick lack the emotional impact that people intend to put into them. This, though, had a perfect amount of rhythm and pace to really ...

The cold endless expanse of white was before me and like every doctor I had begun to get bored. Bored of what, like every doctor? The weather? Death? His/her job? ...

I feel like this was lacking a general mood. Personally I just didn't get a strong image or emotion from it, and really I think that's just what this is ...