StoryWeaver13

Well, I've always had novel-commitment issues. Even when I get consistent reviews of "this is great!," "keep writing!," etc., I fail to keep a consistent loyalty to my stories, cheat ...

The first two suggestions are good ideas. The only other thought I'd have is historian, maybe even one who specializes in the written word (ie. ancient text, old manuscripts, etc.)

It’s been five days past Oh so long, Since we’ve been at the place Where the right way is wrong. And the old windy road That we used to walk ...

There isn't a character named Bella, and neither of my characters have asked for their own room. One of mine is living at home, and the other is waiting for ...

Meredith Lee (AKA Ren) Meredith stepped out of the taxi, rubbing her eyes for the final time before stepping out to view her new school. Since her plane had been ...

Not that I'm asking for any special attention or anything, but Ariana is really more of a loner (and a mysterious one, at that). It'd be okay if she had ...

Cool, I wrote a poem like that only with "cherry stems" on the side, and I always thought that was a cool challenge. Definitely have to say, whether your writer's ...

Okay, so like vampires it seems that angels/demons are becoming cliche, and I really haven't had that much interest in reading the stuff. So, I was surprised that this actually ...

Well, this poem really isn't my style just because I feel like it has the typical teenage-issue of verging on angsty or emo, but you know this was considerably alright ...

Wow, this is really good. I like that it isn't over-articulated, but there's still that feeling of something deeper and honest about it that makes it feel sweet. You use ...

Wrote kinda quick. Kind of about the innocence of childhood, and the overall good-heartedness that we lose when we're older. *sigh* “W…where am I?” Marianna opened her eyes as her ...

This was an interesting story idea, but like Silver pointed out there are a LOT of typos, which makes it really hard to read. Also, it didn't transition well. It ...

I'm not really a huge haiku person because they're so short (I mean who can really express something that quickly?) but this was pretty nice. My only real problem is ...

Cool, I like these. The one with color definitely looks best though - after all, who doesn't love that gorgeous ocean-green when the waves go over the rocks? These are ...

Name: Meredith Lee (but everybody calls her Ren, her middle name...) Age: 16 Gender: Girl Appearance: brown hair, usually put into a pair of short braids, brown eyes, and pale ...