StoryWeaver13

Oops, 'kay, I'll switch that.

My problem with rhyming poetry is that you have to do it right, or it sounds sing-songy, which was kind of the problem in this one. It has a word ...

Everyone was scrambling to set up the party before the Mayor arrived to send out his speech about how hard we have worked through the seasons and why winter should ...

I like the topic, because I know it's a problem a lot of people have. Being a gymnast I personally have my own anorexic moments. Your real issues are all ...

Meredith's schedule, tweaked a bit. Just tell me if there's anything I missed. Voice (not advanced).......................M3..........8:00 to 8:50 Instrumental I.S. ..............................M17..

Meredith (Ren) After grudgingly getting myself out of bed, I found that there were already plenty of people making breakfast. Taking a bite out of a piece of cinnamon toast ...

Meredith (Ren) Orientation? Well, it could've been worse. Alright, I could barely remember it. Yet, somehow, I'd made it through all of my classes, relatively unscathed. My fingers had stumbled ...

Caleb dropped his hand and sighed. He swore he could almost hear the gentle flick of a page turning from behind him; ‘But it couldn’t be, could it?’. Probably better ...

I don't like romances (they're riddled with melodrama and cliche) and I have no clue what compelled me to read this. But actually, I wasn't too disappointed. This was well-written, ...

Meredith (Ren) "We shall," Ren said to her roommate, a little more open already to talking to people. Sugar seemed to definitely put herself out there, a quality Ren envied ...

I like this, the third stanza especially. There were some typos and misspells here and there, so clean this up, and then my real criticism is that you have a ...

Spider's Secret: Well like I said with your piece of poetry, I really like this picture. I like the color, and the whole web-over-the-keyhole image in general. I usually complain ...

First? This picture is really cool. Now on the actual poem, I thought this was pretty good as well. I've never really minded spiders and thought webs were pretty, so ...

*Fine by me! :D * Meredith (Ren) "Thanks," Ren said with a small smile. She had a feeling they'd get along. "And I'd just been on my way to see ...

Meredith (Ren) The room was, in one word, huge compared to the little corner-room that she'd shared with three of her sisters. Triplet ten-year-olds? Nightmarish roommates. She only hoped this ...