StoryWeaver13

So if you've been keeping up with my wall posts, you might know that I wasn't planning on writing this summer. *shrugs* Guess I lied. Well, I definitely won't be ...

I don’t see the point , in believing. No I don’t see the point , in hoping. Oh I can’t see the point , in daring. With all your luck ...

This was really pretty, and overall I really liked this. My only problem is the fact that the rhyme scheme falls apart here and there around the middle. Words like ...

My favorite part of this was the flow that you had, which was really solid. Sorry that I'm getting insanely tired of romance, especially in poetry, so I won't hover ...

Oh my gosh, first off I need to know where you found this awesome boat! Overall, the picture has great color contrast and balance, not to mention that water pictures ...

*Comments in bold, grammar stuff in red I walked up to the tree. Here M om had hung a ribbon for every death as far back as she knew. I ...

"I read your story," he says, grinning a little and giving a small chuckle. I nearly choke on my tea. I feel my eyes get wide and my mouth squeeze ...

~No Stranger To My heart~ Even though I haven't seen you in awhile some kind of punctuation (; or . or - ) I kind of feel like you could ...

Samantha was on the ground, covered in dirt and sweat, her eyes bulging. I climbed out of the hole , brushing off my dress and taking in a long deep ...

This is actually pretty good! It'd be nice if you could blend the fur a little more and add a little texture that way (also adding light and dark contrasts ...

Okay, so we've all written poems about poetry on our unoriginal days (honestly I've probably written about a dozen of these darn things) but I still liked this. It had ...

"If you could wish for one thing, what would it be?" "World peace." No, I want to be famous. "Why do you love to compete?" "Because I like to meet ...

Meredith (Ren) I put down my guitar and glumly got over the inevitable. It was time to get to the one class I despised - voice. If I couldn't talk, ...

Haha, I like this. It's got a lot of humor to a relatively dark situation, which I for whatever reason find hilarious. My one real problem is the fact that ...

This was cool, and you've had this reviewed pretty well by the people before me so I'll try not to repeat what they've already said. And actually I have a ...