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ALETHIA PLOT: Alethia is a world of magic. It is the place that bred legends of dragons, witches, and other supposed “mythical” creatures. Few humans can both come and go ...

This sounds cool, is this going? Full Name: Aiden Lockhart Age (18 or under): 17 Appearance (Written and/or Picture) : Not very tall, but strong despite his looks. He has ...

StoryWeaver, back for more, and no less happy than the first time. *Liked By this point I can't even find many faults, and I love that, because that means that ...

I loved it! I know you already have a first chapter out so I'll try to get to it the meantime, *liked. If you keep writing, I'll keep reading. Your ...

***Thoughts in BOLD , corrections in red . Emma quickly jumped out her room window, and she raced towards the park. She reached into her jacket, and pulled out her ...

Well I thought this was pretty good, but I felt like you were on the verge of developing this cool idea you had and you just didn't quite get to ...

Well I LOVE candy corn and I really like this. Ha ha, I had Gimp on my computer but had no idea what I was doing, so the technologically-impaired part ...

Ev - Gryffindor I woke with no problems for the early breakfast - probably because I'd barely slept at all. My owl Artemis had been making a strange cooing noise ...

Ev - Gryffindor Ev tried to avoid itching the boils that were searing her skin, but she couldn't help but glare at the Slytherin who'd caused them. She wasn't the ...

Evryn (Ev) Summers - Gryffindor Ev made her way to the Gryffindor seats, giving a breath of relief after passing the section of Slytherins. She already hit one for calling ...

What can I say but...I love this. And you made me cry a little again. :D Many Potter topics are trending on Twitter right now, and one of the most ...

Ohh, cool! Name: Evryn (Ev) Summers Age/ What year are you?: 16 Gender: Girl Pureblood or Muggle?: Halfblood Appearance: Red-auburn hair, green eyes, athletically-built, naturally pretty but doesn't w

*Hi! Corrections in red, suggestions in bold. Warning you - I'm feeling extremely nitpicky. ^_^ I peered out over the side of the ship, my fiery red locks waving in ...

There are only two things I would change: -Name of this (sounds a little preachy) -How much you talk about God (not a bad thing - my reason for this ...

Well I finally get to read and review the second chapter of this! And I'm glad I finally did. :D Again, the tone of this is just classic (like reading ...