StoryWeaver13

I don't know, this just didn't quite work for me. I felt like the lines shouldn't have been so uneven, as well as extending this to tell more details of ...

I actually like the concept of this. I'm sorry, I don't usually review lyrics so I'm probably pretty bad at this, but I like to write music also and the ...

You're in my heart so strong and steady, like a butterfly in the meadow, or like a cat with a mouse, I have this feeling like I cant, < Don't ...

Today I stood at King's Cross station , Between platforms nine and ten, my palm pressed against the stone, praying it'd let me in. Fans are all the same. A ...

Well I thought that this was an interesting piece, although I'm not completely sure I understood the main point of it. Nonetheless it was very well-written, and it allowed a ...

You reviewed something of mine earlier, I do believe! Thanks. :D BUT, that doesn't mean I'm going to be any easier on you. This was alright, but I felt like ...

Okay, I thought this was really good. It was just powerful, every line of it, and it was almost compelling. I usually don't like such strict styles of rhyming because ...

You won’t tell me you 're upset because I might think you 're strange. That is the way it is, the way it has always been. This is a good ...

Pic 1: This one's pretty nice, but it lacked any real focus Pic 2: Ooh, graveyard! I felt like this could've been a *little* better, but it's still a pretty ...

I actually found this pretty interesting. Jent's right, it was in a way a rambling narration, and yet it was dry and I personally loved the descriptions that were given ...

Based on...somebody... Imagine a time where we are formed Of Two, not One, a bitter number, Never alone or empty-hearted, Made of Two Faces, Two noses, Yet One heart pulsating ...

Hey psudiname. :D This was definitely an interesting start, and I'm itching to read the next chapter if you decide to continue. My one thought that gives me an edge ...

Hey, you reviewed something I wrote a few days ago I do believe! Thank you, and here to return the favor . ;)Anyway... When Veritas said "terribly well-written," it couldn't ...

Unimpressive, some may go as far as to say disgusting; scum on the belly of an Above Sea whale, or maybe a rotten tooth that still clung stubbornly to a ...

I thought this was pretty good, I'm all for that girls-don't-need-to-be-in-a-relationship-to-be-happy stuff. I really liked these lines: I'm strong enough to stand on my own two feet, and I'm strong ...