StoryWeaver13

Two things to note: yes, this is somewhat inspired by a song (which gave me the poem's namesake). More importantly though, it's inspired by a couple of personal experiences that ...

*Applause* Ha ha, okay, anyway. I know that isn't much of a critique. But this was verryyy deep, and I found myself delving deeper and deeper into the feeling of ...

I'm an open-minded Christian and take no offense to this, at all. In fact I find it interesting because these type of things (ie. who created God, what does He ...

Oohhh, I love this kind of writing! :D Simple yet clever wording, a subtle flow and rhythm of words, and a witty, sad, and somehow pleasant tone throughout. Is this ...

What a silly thing, a scientist, One such as I, A human being who truly does Peg-board a butterfly. I watch them glide, like colored wind, Embodying the sky. Oh ...

Penny: Togethers I think my brother Callum and I took a simultaneous breath. Around us, people were scattering or mingling, scoping the area around us. Despite the fear that was ...

Welcome to the site! So when you enter stories here, it's usually a good idea to see how the format turns out - in this case it's pretty much one ...

I liked this a lot; it was really traditional which I usually don't dig because, you know, it's been done (hence the traditional). But this felt different. It felt patriotic ...

Sorry I have to keep going back-and-forth to finish this! b]Name:[/b] Penny Praye Age: 16 Gender Girl Appearence: Straight auburn hair, thin, and pale green eyes. [b]Number&Team Number 4, Togethers. ...

I thought this was a nice poem. It was simple but sweet, and there really weren't any major errors that jumped out at me. Overall I thought this was a ...

We live life like we write on paper; silly lines, you call them, scribbled inarticulately, clumsy next to mine, so tedious and scripted, while yours break from boundaries of grotesque ...

If I'm too young to know "I love you," Then I believe I've found my age. Okay, so I get what you're saying but I don't quite get what you're ...

Well I thought this was pretty good. It was sweet in a weird sort of way; I've got to say though, I can't remember much about the Calypso myth, so ...

I really liked this. It was simple, yet beyond the skin-deep free verse it was a structure collaborating your simplest emotions with truly deep and meaningful ideas. I think this ...

I love these, the first two especially! The lighting is just so pretty...it's perfect. I also liked the third and the fourth is nice also. I thought the fifth was ...