StoryWeaver13

I usually don't like rhyming poetry much, but I actually liked this a lot. It got better as you continued, the beginning a little rough, but I liked the ideas ...

I count the distance as you count the stars, before me mile-markers that glow in headlights, then you, mapping out an ink-blot universe with only sparkling dustmites of potential doorways, ...

I really liked this, it's simplistic but at the same time has a lot to it. There's a really nice flow and the way you weaved it together was pretty ...

Oh, this was sweet! I liked that it had a happy ending, which becomes pretty scarce sometimes, doesn't it? Well I definitely liked the whole general idea, and I'm not ...

As everybody's been saying, it would've been nice to have some back-story, possibly involving whether or not this was her first time handling a gun. Also possibly a glimpse at ...

Aww so short! But you've said you're going to extend it, which is a good idea. One thing I kind of noticed around the beginning was that the sentence structures ...

He saw a dead crow, in a drain, No comma needed on the first line. and a baby barely able to breath e in a crowded morning clinic. This land ...

Hey, so I'm here to pick this apart a little bit! First thing I'm noticing right off the bat (still on the first paragraph as I write this part) is ...

Okay, so I'm apologizing ahead of time for my lack of ability to review romance. Not really my area, and I've got to say I have a habit of being ...

In Our life time We've got to face many changes Some make us as good as can be But some make you suffer Worse than your wildest dreams. My two ...

It isn't often a novel ends up on the front of this site, so I knew this probably had to be either really good or something stupidly hyped like "Twilight." ...

Haha, I loved this. There were definitely a couple lines where it was a bit of a stretch and it didn't completely make sense, but all the same, I thought ...

I have a couple issues with this poem and so I'll warn you that I'm in the mood to tear this apart. First is that it's lackluster in imagery or ...

About re-meeting someone, kind of has to do with a personal thing, so sorry if some of this really isn't completely understood for whatever reason. It’s a rainy Soundview-Something Street ...

Even for a prologue, this is incomplete. I feel like we just don't have enough suspense built up in this yet, like it needed to drag out a little longer ...