StoryWeaver13

Wow, I really liked this. I have a couple typical issues with amateur rhyming poetry (not that I'm calling you "amateur," but like the rest of us young and a ...

Morning My eyes fold shut as they gaze down the black abysmal mug of Monday coffee, black by brand of day and bitter expectation. The sharp smell lulls the quintessential ...

I'm actually going to disagree a little with the first reviewer and say that I wouldn't capitalize it! She's right, usually lack of capitalization doesn't work at all in poetry, ...

Well even though I'm reading and reviewing this through my phone I actually liked reading about your hipster character here. XD Is this continued? It felt like just the beginning, ...

I am only one of billions with beliefs of millions. But can he see me? I am only a fruitless tree, yet I receive his love. I am not a ...

Because I still can't convince my heart to believe that "goodbye for now" really means "goodbye forever." And so it’s goodbye. Goodbyes taste like an empty temptation with the reality ...

This was pretty cool! I definitely felt like there was more of a vintage feel during the beginning rather than the end, however, and there were a few points where ...

I thought this was really good! I'm no hockey watcher but I read the Wiki information and I've got to say that I felt like rooting for him too. XD ...

I thought this was really good. :D It's hard to talk about depression and suicidal thoughts and make it unique from all the other poetry of the same theme, but ...

I actually thought this was really well-written. Overall, this was a really good piece; I loved the way you explained your main character, it made us really sympathize with her ...

I actually really liked this. It was interesting, especially the first part. There was something really compelling about the fact that there were no quotation marks when they were communicating; ...

*Warning: I'm in a nitpicky mood, so I might tear this apart. Don't worry though, it doesn't mean I don't like your story. It's just that I really want to ...

Hey Blue. :D This was soo short, but soo cute! I'm not kidding, I just...love this. I know, it's only four lines, but they're four lines of epicness. Maybe this ...

*Applause* No, seriously, this rocked. This is why I love free verse; it breathed perfectly, with something between poetry and prose that makes it tell a story when it's only ...

Well, I really liked this. :D Typically I'm not a huge fan of poetry that's so blunt and with such short lines, but you avoided the typical problems of it ...