StoryWeaver13

Whoa, usually my below-squirrel-level attention span just can't get through something this long that's on a computer. But this totally hooked me in. I don't think there's much else that ...

Name: Skye Waterman Age: 16 Grade (9/10/11/12): 11 Hair: Light brown Eyes: Same Relative Height: 5'4"...okay, maybe 5'3".... Relative Weight: 120 (Gah! Too skinny!) Other Looks Info: Personality: She'

Name: Lyra Porter Age (10-18): 16 Parents (Mortal and Godly): Will Porter and Athena(Greek) Appearance: Blonde hair and silver-gray eyes. Short and thin, but athletically-built. Personality: Lyra can

I never saw the original version, but this is a pretty good start! I do have one problem though, and in my personal opinion it's a rather big one. On ...

I didn't feel like there was a point, per se, to this. But I did like it. Your character has an almost over-the-top happy-go-lucky attitude, and it'll probably rub some ...

Well I loved this personally. It's so dark and twisted, and I have a terrible enjoyment for things like this. There were grammar things here and there, but I really ...

the children live in the strange stone houses, words embedded on the wall. the children rest in their well-made beds, those children, oh so small. the children sleep so silently; ...

Short! But good for its size. If you had any plans on developing this, definitely do, because adding back story and such this could be a really cool novel, or ...

This was a nice poem. (: I did have issues with the second stanza, though. I felt like it was sandwiched between two really solid stanzas, but fell flat in ...

Wow. I just...wow. At first, I wasn't really warming up to this poem. The beginning felt emotionally chilled and distant and overly-formal almost, for whatever reason, to a point where ...

I'm not a photographer, but I love these! Particularly the last one, which is just adorable in its own quirky little way. Did you really take these with your phone? ...

Wow, this definitely related to me personally, even though I'm only a junior. I mean, I think a lot of people can relate, even when they aren't at the same ...

Basically I thought this had kind of an interesting idea, particularly because usually poems tend to be the reverse of this (ie. "Don't be fooled by my smile, I'm miserable ...

I feel like I'm missing something because of the way it doesn't completely begin or completely end with the first and last sentences (part of the writing exercise?) Like why ...

I feel as though I should applaud, or possibly bow to your mighty awesomeness. Okay, a little dramatic, but this poem is honestly amazing. And this is a terrible review, ...