StormyZSnifter

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you liked this chapter; it made my day to read your review.

Geez, man, why do you have to be so good at this? Have you ever considered being an editor as a career choice? While I'd love to blame all of ...

Thank you for the thorough review! I know there's was a lot that needed to be said... Perhaps choosing my poorly written, info dump chapter that's basically there to connect ...

Wow, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this, and your review was super in depth and helpful! You're totally right, April's character needs a lot of refining and ...

Hi! Thank you for the review-so sorry it took me so long to get back! Yeah, this is by far my least favorite part of the story. I'm most likely ...

Oh my goodness, thank you so much for the review! I'm honestly relieved that you like the concept, and your constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. That accursed telling instead of ...

Hey! Thanks for the review! Yeah, the nonsensical symbols are just things I do to entertain myself while writing; the finished product will not be like that :) Um. Wow, ...