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Re: We, Cryptids Chapter Five
Wow! I just jumped into the middle of this story but nothing can hook a reader like a cute puppy. Right off the bat I noticed that this narrative has ...
Nov 23, 2023 -
Re: Heart of the Sea
Hi! Review time! I loved this story. It was beautifully written and well-paced. I understood and empathized with the main character as the narrative went along, and I really appreciate ...
Feb 15, 2022 -
Re: Solitaire ~ Chapter Two
Hello, Hello! Review time! Oh my goodness... this is awesome. The amount of detail is simply incredible. I am totally looking forward to reading what happens next! Ok... so first ...
Feb 1, 2022 -
Re: Dark Vice: Prologue
Hi, 'tis me again :) This is really great. I will have you know that I will eagerly be awaiting more installations. That is some cliffhanger you've concocted. So... review ...
Jan 13, 2022 -
Re: The Dream hunt: Prologue-part 2 + Chapter 1
Hello! I think that this story is off to a great start! Right off the bat, you draw the reader in with your descriptions and figurative language. The action is ...
Jan 11, 2022 -
Re: Beware of the Light (Prologue)
Hi! Wow! This is really impressive. I especially love the use of figurative language in this prologue, and how it is displayed from the get-go regarding the drop of water. ...
Jan 6, 2022
