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Re: Children Of Mana - Ch. 2
Thanks everyone for their reviews! ^_^ ~Poem: I'll be working on those repetitive words. I really never noticed them. ^^ ~Meadow: Tenses... Well, I'm glad to be doing better. Hopefully ...
Apr 18, 2009 -
Re: Tell Him
Hiya Forever!!! Thanks for posting in my thread. ^^ I haven't gotten a reply in a while. Sorry this took a long time. Harsh??? I doubt it. You're a good ...
Apr 18, 2009 -
Re: True Freaks
Aww, Peanut. You don't really feel that way do you? So. Is this a poem or just a piece? 'Cause it didn't sound like a poem to me. :wink: This ...
Apr 17, 2009 -
Re: The Dance of Nations (WIP)
Hello! ^^ Welcome to YWS!!! Good job on the two reviews!! Onto the critique. Paragraphs - Currently its just one big paragraph. You should split it up. - It would ...
Apr 17, 2009 -
Re: Hello all
... Sorry, I'm no help with puns and jokes, but: Welcome to YWS!!!!!!! The place for writers to be! :D It's a great place to get your work critiqued too. ...
Apr 17, 2009 -
Re: The User Below You ... [2]
Haha. So true. TPBM :arrow: Likes to sing in the shower.
Apr 16, 2009 -
Re: A Drawing of a Crying Girl
Wow. O.o This is really good. I mean, really good! It's sooo life like!!!!!!! - the hair; great! The shading on this is really nice. It looks like really shiney ...
Apr 16, 2009 -
Re: Ocean Battle Matte Painting
Wow. It's looking as good as ever, Dynamo! :D Thanks for the PM! Nah, don't worry. Everyone likes compliments. :P Some things: (Yay! This one has something I can comment ...
Apr 16, 2009 -
Re: The green demon
Hello! Welcome to YWS!! I would have spelled out your name but it is very long... Is it perhaps a stanza from Edgar Allen Poe's The Raven? It reminds me ...
Apr 16, 2009 -
Re: Bubblegum has arrived..
Heya Bubblegum!!! Nice username! :D Yay! Your 13 like me! Another youngster newbie. ^_^ So some things they didn't cover. :arrow: Blog!!! So, here on YWS you can make a ...
Apr 16, 2009 -
Re: Hey there.
Heya Roo!!!!!! (love that name!) Welcome to YWS!!! The totally awesome place for rants and writing... So, a few things they didn't explaii is the: Blog!!! So, here on YWS ...
Apr 16, 2009 -
Re: 7 Reasons Why Not to Live With Your Best Friend
Hello GroundHog!!! Welcome to YWS!!! Some things: -For every post you must do two reviews. That's YWS 2:1 ratio. -Make a post in the Welcome Forum to be explained all ...
Apr 16, 2009 -
Re: Five Children Slain by Father
Oh my. That's is positively horrid!!! Those poor children, and mother! Thats soo sad. :smt010 :smt010 :smt010 :smt011 :smt011 :smt011 :smt011 :smt011 :smt011 :smt010 :smt010 :smt010 :(
Apr 15, 2009 -
Re: ???
???? :D
Apr 15, 2009 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [3]
Banned for living in the World of Inbetween! :D
Apr 15, 2009