Storm_Bringer

Hiya!~ I liked this very much, although it's very short. Also I was a little confused when you started talking about all those guys. On to the nitpicks, though there ...

TJ: Wow! Since you said you liked poems so much i decided to check one out. Wow! I liked this, even if i didn't quite understand what it was about. ...

Hello! Do you think you can review my story for me? Here's a link. Title:Children of Mana Genre:Fantasy. THanks So Much!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D -Storm

Hello! Welcome to YWS. I'm Storm_Bringer and I shall review your story today. Every once in a while, he would stop, slump over the table, supported by his locked elbows, ...

Hello! Wow. This was interesting. The ghost and reading minds was cool. A few things though. Why is Courtney still so vibrant? She's dead and she knows she's dead but ...

Thanks MeadowLark! I didn't know that about the people speaking thing. Thanks. Sorry about the tenses. I wasn't sure which one to use. _Storm_Bringer

Well I reread the whole thing and I edited. I really tried to correct all the tenses and "talking heads" as Stella calls them. If you find anymore could you ...

Hello Wordartisan! This was good! You let us know more about Katie and Adrian. The only thing is that you should split the paragraphs up. They are kinda long in ...

Hi! I love the story so far! I especially love the powers. Water, wind, electricity, earth! Oh my. Can't wait to see how it goes! I love the tournament idea ...

Hey! Welcome! In_The_Moonlight is right you should do two reviews before you post anything. If you go to the Welcome forum and introduce yourself people there will explain all the ...

Hello! I like this story but the mom is really overprotective huh? Doesn't every kid have a bike? I don't get why the mom is all crazed. i like Theresa ...

Hey Meep! I think thedelphinater covered up the grammar stuff. I don't know why you said that this was horrible, i liked it. I hope you put more about Melody's ...

Hello Amon! I'm Storm and i shall review you story! I really liked this, the powers and two chapters per each person. Then everyone will come together at the house ...

Hi Meep! Since you welcomed me I decided to review your awesome story for you! Though I probably won't have to do much! “Umm, I need to go talk to ...

Thanks for all the replies and for explaining all the rules! :) Incognito Temptation, no need to worry about the spellings. When i lived in Thailand I spelt like that ...